EternalXIII's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lejin - U aint me]

eheheh

WHY CAN'T I BE YOU!!!!!

I tried everything, but I is just fail! xp

Lol, any ways, stupid shit aside, this shit was pretty dope!! I was pleasantly surprised!! Most rappers on NG are weak.

Lejin responds:

The truth HURTS!!!
<<BANG>>KO!!!

Thank you Eternbal LOL you brazy man! xD

[Delinquent Winters]

What the fortune!

Seriously. The second the song started, I was smiling. This is deffinately one DJ I don't wanna fuck with xp

DJ-Delinquent responds:

WTF i was just on ur page like 3 seconds ago

U scarey bastard! DX

[~GP~ Robotic Emotions]

diggen it

The bass kinda has a Benny Benassi feel to it. And the keys definitely added a good trance element. Good progession through te whole track. Very high energy. If this song came on at a rave I'd be sitting in front of the speakers.

GranPian responds:

awesome dude. well, if this is like Benny Benassi then I must be on a good roll. thanks for the review.

[J2A [Demo]]

not bad at all

Intro needs to get my attention though. It was way too long. Generally people need to be attracted to your song in the first 15 seconds or so. The quicker you can catch someones ear, the better. Your song doesn't even really seem to pick up until some time after 1 minute. I would also recommend some more counter melodies and layers in general. Another thing. Your bass doesn't seem to come through enough. Try eqing the bass up. Hope this helps.

Zenan responds:

Cheers for the review dude.
I was kinda going for the long intro, I like it like that. I agree I do need to up the bass, that was coming through before, I must've fucked something up.
I'll try and sort it out, thanks! :)

[Luminous]

A long way to go

but that's not a bad thing. It sounds like you may be using FL but I can't be 100% The piano is actually pretty interesting, but the drums were really weak. Take time to figure out how to make individual instrument/drum/hat/lead/bass/whateve r, sound good individually before you put out a sound. The old idiom applies, practice makes perfect.

mikekay responds:

thx for the tips, i know i suck at drums i just cant do them but im gonna practice.

[-E- Hooks]

they do have apoint

The versus don't quite seem to fit. I think it may be that the lyrics seem slow compared to the rest of the song. Kazy comes in with that really hard chorus. You should have adopted a harder voice style for this beat and maybe rapped a little "harder" and by that I mean take a metal mentality and get your voice a little more metal. Any ways, still a great song! I listened to it a few times.

Emdee-NF responds:

Thanks dude, your beats are the shiz lol

[GSG - Violet Monk Sunglasses]

eheheh

Your song is #1 and then I zero bombed it... xp

j/k

The beat is too ill. there is only one small thing that got to me about it. like in the middle of each bar there is a sound that sounds like someone with cotton mouth. It's not really that noticeable, but the more I hear it the more I wish it wasn't there. Didn't effect the quality of the track though. Still listened to it a few times in a row.

GunstarGreene responds:

Thanks, I don't know if this deserves to be #1, but thanks for the feedback.

Also, I don't know what you mean about the cottonmouth thing.

[Gangsta Rave Girl]

Yah trick xp YAHHHHH

This song is fucking crazy. Seriously the perfect mix between the two genres. The breakdowns with just the lyrics an the drums completely sold me. At first I wasn't really listening that closely. But as soon as those drums kicked in my attention went 100% to the song. Very good!

DJ-Delinquent responds:

Now tell me

can u get this [Inser F word here] song out of ur head?

lol... have to improb for this stupid Chinese Sight Remix

[[MS] - Packet of Crisps]

ZOMG

Nujabes is fucking amazing!! lol, I saw the comment on one of your reviews and felt I needed to agree! Japan has some insane producers. any ways on to you! This shit is fucking fresh. The sample is so damn chill. The drums are nice too, but I mean damn, I just love those keys, and your chops are slick as fuck too. any way, enough blathering,, lol. Great shit man!

Macsalad responds:

thanks dude!!! you should check out the original by Angelo Badalamenti, which is on the Mulholland Drive OST!
some new shit will be uploaded soon enough!

[FF | I Said Swing It]

just felt I needed to

6,7,8,9,10. It may be simple, but the shit is still good. Vocal samples fit well at the end.

freddyfinger responds:

LOL i was wondering what you were talking about but i see it now. thanks for review