EternalXIII's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[J2A [Demo]]

not bad at all

Intro needs to get my attention though. It was way too long. Generally people need to be attracted to your song in the first 15 seconds or so. The quicker you can catch someones ear, the better. Your song doesn't even really seem to pick up until some time after 1 minute. I would also recommend some more counter melodies and layers in general. Another thing. Your bass doesn't seem to come through enough. Try eqing the bass up. Hope this helps.

Zenan responds:

Cheers for the review dude.
I was kinda going for the long intro, I like it like that. I agree I do need to up the bass, that was coming through before, I must've fucked something up.
I'll try and sort it out, thanks! :)

[Ghost with Dice]

>XP

LMAO! You'd be the guy who went to prison and asked the other inmates to be gentle. xp

Seriously though, good song! Generally people get better the more they make music, so I really can't wait for more of your stuffs!

[Smoke Trees Bitches]

was this serious?

like... yeah.....

[Luminous]

A long way to go

but that's not a bad thing. It sounds like you may be using FL but I can't be 100% The piano is actually pretty interesting, but the drums were really weak. Take time to figure out how to make individual instrument/drum/hat/lead/bass/whateve r, sound good individually before you put out a sound. The old idiom applies, practice makes perfect.

mikekay responds:

thx for the tips, i know i suck at drums i just cant do them but im gonna practice.

[Yun+WS - Gettin' Dusty]

I'm wet

xp

Crazy track. The strings were so crazy and so was that bass. I'm a go smoke some shurm!

[-E- Hooks]

they do have apoint

The versus don't quite seem to fit. I think it may be that the lyrics seem slow compared to the rest of the song. Kazy comes in with that really hard chorus. You should have adopted a harder voice style for this beat and maybe rapped a little "harder" and by that I mean take a metal mentality and get your voice a little more metal. Any ways, still a great song! I listened to it a few times.

Emdee-NF responds:

Thanks dude, your beats are the shiz lol

[GSG - Violet Monk Sunglasses]

eheheh

Your song is #1 and then I zero bombed it... xp

j/k

The beat is too ill. there is only one small thing that got to me about it. like in the middle of each bar there is a sound that sounds like someone with cotton mouth. It's not really that noticeable, but the more I hear it the more I wish it wasn't there. Didn't effect the quality of the track though. Still listened to it a few times in a row.

GunstarGreene responds:

Thanks, I don't know if this deserves to be #1, but thanks for the feedback.

Also, I don't know what you mean about the cottonmouth thing.

[[MS] - BusinessRMX]

What the fortune!!!

OMG, Eminem on a fucking chill ass beat. It really works. I can't believe it. Great work.

[Crank that Spongebob]

ROFLS!!

Your Lyrics are actually pretty good! But that beat had me laughing! It's actually a pretty good beat. Sponge Bob Square Pants! There were a couple chops in the beat that were off. Also, the whole song could use a better EQ and mixdown. Bass was on point. Lyrics get kinda washed out at a couple parts. Seriously though, if this ever gets a Newer EQ, let me know I'd like to hear it!

[Gangsta Rave Girl]

Yah trick xp YAHHHHH

This song is fucking crazy. Seriously the perfect mix between the two genres. The breakdowns with just the lyrics an the drums completely sold me. At first I wasn't really listening that closely. But as soon as those drums kicked in my attention went 100% to the song. Very good!

DJ-Delinquent responds:

Now tell me

can u get this [Inser F word here] song out of ur head?

lol... have to improb for this stupid Chinese Sight Remix