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The versus don't quite seem to fit. I think it may be that the lyrics seem slow compared to the rest of the song. Kazy comes in with that really hard chorus. You should have adopted a harder voice style for this beat and maybe rapped a little "harder" and by that I mean take a metal mentality and get your voice a little more metal. Any ways, still a great song! I listened to it a few times.

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Score: 9

"pretty fucking dope"

submission: Evsomnia(Finished)

date: April 3, 2009

The lyrics are pretty crazy. The beat is also pretty cool. Damn good production value.

May 14, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks man! that means alot.

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Score: 10

"eheheh"

submission: Violet Monk Sunglasses

date: April 3, 2009

Your song is #1 and then I zero bombed it... xp

j/k

The beat is too ill. there is only one small thing that got to me about it. like in the middle of each bar there is a sound that sounds like someone with cotton mouth. It's not really that noticeable, but the more I hear it the more I wish it wasn't there. Didn't effect the quality of the track though. Still listened to it a few times in a row.

April 4, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks, I don't know if this deserves to be #1, but thanks for the feedback.

Also, I don't know what you mean about the cottonmouth thing.

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Score: 10

"Awww, shucks..."

submission: WS - Garage Band Sampler

date: April 3, 2009

Am I the only person who has never used garage band or know any of it's sounds? Rofls... But seriously though... am I?

April 3, 2009

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I haven't used it before, but I'm aware of most of the sounds that come with it.

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Score: 10

"What the fortune!!!"

submission: [MS] - BusinessRMX

date: April 2, 2009

OMG, Eminem on a fucking chill ass beat. It really works. I can't believe it. Great work.

April 3, 2009

Author's Response:

thanks a lot dude, I did that beat pretty quick yesterday after having worked on the drums for 2 days, I flipped an old jazz tune I thought had a sloppy feeling to it and kinda built the drums around that, after that added some sub bass to enhance the dark mood I wanted it to have. Then I opened up my eminem acapella folder and chose Business to propably go with the beat. Then I struggled for 15 mins trying to manually beatmatch it, and after that I discovered that I stretched it exactly to the pitch needed to make the choir bit go with 0:56 - WTF?
Currently I'm experimenting with tunes I can sample to go together with the beat (I'm uploading the instrumental soon)
thanks for reviewin!

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Score: 9

"ROFLS!!"

submission: Crank that Spongebob

date: April 2, 2009

Your Lyrics are actually pretty good! But that beat had me laughing! It's actually a pretty good beat. Sponge Bob Square Pants! There were a couple chops in the beat that were off. Also, the whole song could use a better EQ and mixdown. Bass was on point. Lyrics get kinda washed out at a couple parts. Seriously though, if this ever gets a Newer EQ, let me know I'd like to hear it!

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Score: 10

"Yah trick xp YAHHHHH"

submission: Gangsta Rave Girl

date: April 1, 2009

This song is fucking crazy. Seriously the perfect mix between the two genres. The breakdowns with just the lyrics an the drums completely sold me. At first I wasn't really listening that closely. But as soon as those drums kicked in my attention went 100% to the song. Very good!

April 2, 2009